I'm trying to practice and I know my proportions and angling sucks; I need some suggestions on what to change when I draw to make it better. I'll start off with these older ones:
Everything Here needs redlined and critiqued :D
If you could be so kind as to point out what's wrong/right/needs more improvement/is perfect; I'd be greatful. :D
Even if someone else already done it, please feel free to do it again (I learn better from hearing the same; or even different things from multiple people.)

Be sure to tell me what you did a redline/ critique on; I get confused easily. XD
As I draw more, I'll add a direct link to it for more suggestions :D