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Toby, My Deer OC

What do you think? I understand I have a long way to go before I can draw deer right, but this is also a old drawing so try not to think bad of me D:

06-14-2010 at 5:15 AM

I think it's good, but a bit stiff. You might want to work on shading, too.

06-5-2010 at 7:57 PM

Thanks, and yea that's why he's left eye looks a bit funny, its the glass x3 Thanks for the crit too

06-5-2010 at 6:13 PM

Looks good, but you might want to show the bones on his leg a bit. That is, if you're going for realistic. If not, good job, besides the eye. You could claim he's wearing a monacle, though, and cover for it.

06-3-2010 at 1:51 AM

Haha no, I love crit CB He has no antlers due to a defect in he's bones, he's also umm *cough* Also a human, that can turn into a deer, I can explain why but it would take to long o-o

06-3-2010 at 1:46 AM

I think the legs should be longer, and I don't think the tips of the legs are supposed to come together like that. Tail is also a bit large. >.> Sorry, not trying to be harsh. Does he have antlers?

06-3-2010 at 1:39 AM

I know =P After I was able to finish off he's coloring I noticed it and just gave up :|

06-3-2010 at 12:25 AM

He looks good, though one of his eyes looks a bit odd.

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